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cool quiet morning
flock of birds above full moon
light as a feather
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moist patches of green
peeking through winter stubble
welcome this spring rain
cool quiet morning
flock of birds above full moon
light as a feather
moist patches of green
peeking through winter stubble
welcome this spring rain
Love the “cool quiet morning” pic
Thank you for sharing David.
Nice haiku. Each pointing to a single meme. They contain no philosophizing leaving the reader to look on/at their own quietude in the first and renewal in the second.
Haiku is not poetry.
These are paired nicely with the images.
I appreciate your critique Will, thank you for sharing.