morning, evening, #11

cool quiet morning
flock of birds above full moon
light as a feather

moist patches of green
peeking through winter stubble
welcome this spring rain

Comments

4 responses to “morning, evening, #11”

  1. David Nordquist Avatar
    David Nordquist

    Love the “cool quiet morning” pic

  2. Joe Pallen Avatar
    Joe Pallen

    Thank you for sharing David.

  3. Will Avatar
    Will

    Nice haiku. Each pointing to a single meme. They contain no philosophizing leaving the reader to look on/at their own quietude in the first and renewal in the second.
    Haiku is not poetry.
    These are paired nicely with the images.

    1. jpallen Avatar
      jpallen

      I appreciate your critique Will, thank you for sharing.

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